LearnJazzPiano.com archives: lullaby
asteffen -- 08/10/2006, 03:58:34 -- #29228
Hey,
I put a new composition on myspace, that I have written for the baby of a good friend. Tell me how You like and what i could improve!
http://www.myspace.com/milesdavispharmacy
Thanks, A.

asteffen -- 08/16/2006, 12:46:43 -- #29228
pity.No suggestions so far ::(

bavern -- 08/16/2006, 16:25:39 -- #29228
sounds really nica i think

wdennissorrell -- 08/17/2006, 23:53:33 -- #29228
Sorry for the delay, I thought the piece was beautiful. That being said I also felt it needed the melody brought out more but not so much on a piano. It simply felt that the melody would have been more noticeable with a piano accompanying a violin or flute. This of course is just my opinion, but I still thought it was beautiful.
Thanks for the music!
Peace out.

asteffen -- 08/18/2006, 01:44:11 -- #29228
Hey, that's nice! I also thought about something like this. I actually would like to have some lyrics for this but words don't come easy to me ;)

wdennissorrell -- 08/18/2006, 19:12:33 -- #29228
Try and verbalize what the music means to you. Then apply that to the melody. Perehaps then the words will come.
Thanks again.
Peace out!

Kai -- 08/19/2006, 01:17:01 -- #29228
I listened to it a few days ago and thought it was beautiful too. I did wonder what it would sound like with other instruments - cello, for instance.  I then listened to it again and think it is lovely as it is.

Gordon -- 08/19/2006, 06:47:42 -- #29228
That's one lovely piece of music asteffen. Beautifully gentle and controlled and emotionally evocative.

asteffen -- 08/19/2006, 09:51:47 -- #29228
Hi,
does anybody the great iproject myvirtualband.com. I put the song there so that other musicians can add their ideas. Check it out it's worth it!!!
http://www.forums.myvirtualband.com/read.php?12,12117,page=2

especially the vocal version of bpj001 is wonderful!

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